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Bleeding on the floor,
vision a blurry mess,
this is what you've done,
used me like a pawn in your little game of chess.

My heart ripped out,
left broken in shards,
this is what you've done,
you finally tore down my guards.

They say a broken heart,
is easy to repair,
this is what you've done,
but this pain is hard to bare.

I hope one day,
you'll feel my pain,
this is what you've done,
used me fo your own personal gain.

Dead on the floor,
seeing a blank nothingness,
this is what I did,
I'm no longer your pawn in this little game of chess.
©2009 ~AliHale102
:iconalihale102:

Author's Comments

Well, this actually serves two purposes.
1. It is for the =RawEm0tion theme coming up in a couple of weeks.
2. It is for my 100 Themes Challenge, found here, [link] This one is number 43.

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:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
Rly great, as always :heart:
I like the end with 'this is what I did'
Wonderful :D

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it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.


~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
:iconalihale102:
Haha, thank you!
I kinda realized after posting it that that was the name of that book you had me read. ^.^
:heart:

--
"Don't judge me for how I look, judge me for who I am. If you don't like me for who I am, then I say to hell with you!"
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=RawEm0tion~RyanRossFanClub
Two greatest clubs ever =3
:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
Kinda, i'ts similar :D

--
it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.


~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
:iconaedammair-feline:
This is pretty good :)
Well done.

--
..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name....

:bulletpink: Rip your heart out at =RawEm0tion :bulletpink:
:iconalihale102:
Thank you!
I'm glad you liked it! :nod:

--
"Don't judge me for how I look, judge me for who I am. If you don't like me for who I am, then I say to hell with you!"
_________________________________
=RawEm0tion~RyanRossFanClub
Two greatest clubs ever =3
:iconaedammair-feline:
No worries! ;)

--
..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name....

:bulletpink: Rip your heart out at =RawEm0tion :bulletpink:
:iconzefiraelrain:
:+fav:

there's a few typos i can spot...
"you finally tore down my guards." << grammatically it should be torn, not tore.
"but this pain is hard to bare." << bear.

but yeah.
this is an awesom epoem. =]
:iconalihale102:
Thank you, I wasn't exactly sure about the bear part, heh. I couldn't remember for the life of me how it should be. xD

Thank you so much! =]

--
"Don't judge me for how I look, judge me for who I am. If you don't like me for who I am, then I say to hell with you!"
_________________________________
=RawEm0tion~RyanRossFanClub
Two greatest clubs ever =3
:iconzefiraelrain:
you're very welcome =]

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